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post Apr 18 2017, 04:15 AM
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https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12209853/1/Whe...Line-As-Friends

Ongoing, and not complete... sometimes I wonder who will finish what. Still, I figured people might be interested in this.




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post Apr 18 2017, 04:24 PM
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Yeah it's pretty good.
Thanks for this!
On chapter two lol It's definitely a hoot!




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post Apr 19 2017, 03:09 AM
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Read all of what they had so far. Not bad, not bad at all.




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post Apr 25 2017, 09:19 PM
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Need to take a look at this when I have time.




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post Jun 29 2017, 08:54 PM
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Here's one from a first-time TS fic writer. And this one's complete.

Completion in stories is big to me. No offense to people w/incomplete work.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11335210/1/Clover-and-Alex

I reviewed each chapter for support.

Maybe the writer will read & comment on my stuff in return. z19.png

Things are quiet over there. I'm getting some reads & comments on Wattpad though.

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post Aug 29 2017, 11:58 AM
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I absolutely love both of these fics, I hope the first one gets completed as well. It's really great.




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post Sep 3 2017, 04:53 AM
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QUOTE (jettmanas @ Apr 17 2017, 09:15 PM) *
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12209853/1/Whe...Line-As-Friends

Ongoing, and not complete... sometimes I wonder who will finish what. Still, I figured people might be interested in this.


This story is super cute, thank you for posting it. I like fanfiction.net but it sometimes feels like all the TS stories there are Sam/Scam - nothing wrong with that, just not my favorite ship - so I don't look there often.

I always liked the idea of Alex having a crush on Clover, which might not be requited right away - since Clover is canonically boy-crazy I feel like she might take a while to warm up to the idea. It's sweet how affectionate she is with Alex here.

It's also nice to read something about the girls just hanging out at home, making breakfast for each other, etc, which I feel like we didn't get to see enough of in the show (Evil Boyfriend being one exception out of the episodes I've seen so far).

I liked the image of Clover snuggled up in Alex's bed and not wanting to get up and later not being able to sleep because she slept all afternoon. I also laughed when her reply to Sam's coming home was "Great, ask her to join in."

I can't think why they wouldn't tell Sam but hey secrets are fun.

It says this was just updated August 6 so looks like the author is still at it. I'll go post this as a review and hopefully encourage them. : )
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post Sep 4 2017, 04:12 AM
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QUOTE (hdc @ Sep 2 2017, 09:53 PM) *
QUOTE (jettmanas @ Apr 17 2017, 09:15 PM) *
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12209853/1/Whe...Line-As-Friends

Ongoing, and not complete... sometimes I wonder who will finish what. Still, I figured people might be interested in this.


This story is super cute, thank you for posting it. I like fanfiction.net but it sometimes feels like all the TS stories there are Sam/Scam - nothing wrong with that, just not my favorite ship - so I don't look there often.

I always liked the idea of Alex having a crush on Clover, which might not be requited right away - since Clover is canonically boy-crazy I feel like she might take a while to warm up to the idea. It's sweet how affectionate she is with Alex here.

It's also nice to read something about the girls just hanging out at home, making breakfast for each other, etc, which I feel like we didn't get to see enough of in the show (Evil Boyfriend being one exception out of the episodes I've seen so far).

I liked the image of Clover snuggled up in Alex's bed and not wanting to get up and later not being able to sleep because she slept all afternoon. I also laughed when her reply to Sam's coming home was "Great, ask her to join in."

I can't think why they wouldn't tell Sam but hey secrets are fun.

It says this was just updated August 6 so looks like the author is still at it. I'll go post this as a review and hopefully encourage them. : )


Glad you enjoyed it. smjaponais221.gif

I hear you on Sam/Scam, but use the filter tool to sort those out. And have found some good ones....
There's one epic that's amazing writing overall. It's staggering that it's Totally Spies:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12298176/1/Tin...r-Totally-Spies

The only odd thing is he won't respond to my messages. Well, he did once.

I was inspired by this classic writer:
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/612789/capm

And I've worked hard to make good stories for a while. Excuse the self-plugging, but I love when a read, fav, & review trickles in.
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/8008046/jettmanas

(All of mine are complete)
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post Sep 4 2017, 06:54 AM
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QUOTE (jettmanas @ Sep 3 2017, 09:12 PM) *
Glad you enjoyed it. smjaponais221.gif

I hear you on Sam/Scam, but use the filter tool to sort those out. And have found some good ones....
There's one epic that's amazing writing overall. It's staggering that it's Totally Spies:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12298176/1/Tin...r-Totally-Spies

The only odd thing is he won't respond to my messages. Well, he did once.

I was inspired by this classic writer:
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/612789/capm

And I've worked hard to make good stories for a while. Excuse the self-plugging, but I love when a read, fav, & review trickles in.
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/8008046/jettmanas

(All of mine are complete)
Enjoy!


I was disappointed Tim/Mac turned out to be a bad guy as I kinda liked him. Sam seems to have no luck romantically speaking. I also think it's cute how when the girls are on a mission they routinely flirt with much older (like thirtysomething) guys. There seems to be an unwritten rule that they get an age upgrade while on duty, as no one ever dismisses them for being, say, 14.

Also when I watch "The New Jerry" or "Evil Boyfriend" or "Matchmaker" for example I have to marvel at the stupidity of breaking up with one of these girls in favor of some mere plot to conquer the world. (Edit: Though "Spy vs Spy" might be the worst. That guy should have some bitter regrets...once he actually hits puberty.)

I can understand the appeal of having Sam redeem Tim and turn him back to the good side, it's just something I would find more interesting with a female villain like Violet Vanderfleet or Carla Wong. ; )

I did notice Tinker Tailor Totally Spies but wasn't able to get into it, maybe because I've never read the book and could never get into Le Carre in general. (At the risk of sounding lowbrow, Ian Fleming is more my speed.) It does look interesting so maybe I'll have another go at it.

I was going to say I started on Alternative Care and am enjoying it so far though I'm not familiar with Big Hero 6. You did a really nice job with the cover art, the girls look just like they should in it. : )

Yeah some artists/writers are fantastic about replying to fan mail, some are so-so, and some never seem to. If they don't reply they're probably just swamped with real-life stuff.

One story that jumped out at me was Blink of an Eye by AnimationNut. It's an interesting idea (though not a happy one) and I feel like there's a lot more exploration that could be done with it.
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post Sep 4 2017, 01:07 PM
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Oh yes, I remember that.
Re-read it, and what an idea- that after escaping death and injury all those years, a car accident ruins their lives.
Intense conflict & goes beyond the show's boundaries.

For my work, I understand on the BH6 thing. And you should wait on reading many til watching the show...

I do have ones that don't reference important characters if you're curious though:

A Mali-U Christmas (very light)
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Shadow Chasers is the other longer fic, and it crosses over w/Persona. But no need to be a fan of that (everything gets explained).

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post Sep 4 2017, 09:59 PM
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QUOTE (jettmanas @ Sep 4 2017, 06:07 AM) *
Oh yes, I remember that.
Re-read it, and what an idea- that after escaping death and injury all those years, a car accident ruins their lives.
Intense conflict & goes beyond the show's boundaries.


Yes the irony is striking. I would go farther and make it due to a patch of black ice on the road or the truck driver having a heart attack at the wheel - that is, even more random, so there's no one to directly blame (except maybe God, and I've certainly never heard any religious subtext on the show). Maybe one of the girls would take up some religion as a way of trying to get to grips with what happened.

(I should add that I would never want this to happen to them or anyone else - I'm thinking purely in terms of fiction. As you say such a scenario provides a lot of conflict, internal and external, and thus good story material.)

It's interesting to see Clover virtually shrug off her injuries. On one level it seems too simplistic - in reality the healing process mentally and physically would be a lot more arduous. In fact her assumption that she can simply continue to go on missions as before seems like denial that she'll have to work through. On another level, it shows a different side to her - she can be very dramatic about everyday life, but in the face of an irreversible personal disaster she's almost serene.

There would also be some conflict between Sam, who was (1) driving the car and (2) came out almost unscathed, and the other two girls. It's inevitable they would blame her even if not on a conscious level. Alex and Clover might find themselves drawn more closely together by their injuries and there might be a hurt/comfort/romance story there.

Mandy is sympathetic, which I like. She might have a kind of soul crisis from realizing it could just as easily have been her. Maybe she starts being more friendly to the girls but they still sometimes rub each other the wrong way - that could inject some humor into an otherwise pretty dark story.

(I read this story some months ago so these are just thoughts I've been meaning to jot down for a while.)

QUOTE (jettmanas @ Sep 4 2017, 06:07 AM) *
For my work, I understand on the BH6 thing. And you should wait on reading many til watching the show...

I do have ones that don't reference important characters if you're curious though:

A Mali-U Christmas (very light)
WOOHP Australia
Shadow Chasers is the other longer fic, and it crosses over w/Persona. But no need to be a fan of that (everything gets explained).

Good chatting with you!


Yes I don't mind spoilers - most of the episodes I've seen out of order were because I heard something about them (e.g. Jerry and Clover having their personalities switched) and thought "I totally have to see that." The episodes all seem pretty self-contained (I'd prefer more story arcs but I gather these shows tend to have a lot of different writers which makes that harder).

Thank you and I look forward to reading those as well : )
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post Sep 5 2017, 08:40 PM
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Wow, nice insights on that.

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