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Ryofu
post Oct 31 2011, 08:08 PM
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Here's the first chapter to a new yuri fanfic I started featuring Harley Quinn and Poison Ivy from Batman!

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After Harley is kicked out by the Joker the day before Valentine's Day, she reunites with her other on-again, off-again lover, Poison Ivy. But how long will it last this time?


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Harley and Ivy: Roses for My Valentine - Chapter 1 (at Fanfiction.net)
Harley and Ivy: Roses for My Valentine - Chapter 1 (at DeviantArt)
Harley and Ivy: Roses for My Valentine - Chapter 1 (at Deviant Hearts)

Enjoy! If you read, please give me feedback.




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post Oct 31 2011, 11:57 PM
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It's great syxx. There were a couple of minor spelling errors here and there, but other than that it all looked good.




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post Nov 1 2011, 01:03 AM
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QUOTE (CrowSama @ Oct 31 2011, 06:57 PM) *
It's great syxx. There were a couple of minor spelling errors here and there, but other than that it all looked good.


I actually revised it a couple more times vs. the version you I gave you earlier. No major changes, but the current version reads better I think. I think I got it pretty close to perfect. If there were spelling errors left, they didn't come up in Word.




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