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| Mike D 27 | May 4 2007, 04:10 AM Post #1 |
...from the Desert...
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Hello everyone...I made a fan fic story I want to place here. I dubbed the story (Ok I already have) and it's about the spies take a weekend visit to Palm Springs (my home town). But what they encounter is a sinister plot by a mad scientist, Dr. Plastic (I invented him as the celebrities' psuedo-scientific eugenist) who wants to rule the world. I gave out 1% of the story, because 99% hasn't yet to be put down into writing. The number of chapters may change, not too long or short. Enjoy! == Prelude == 30 miles northeast of Palm Springs, Thursday, 10:10PM PDT. It was a warm windy night in the California desert, and only the snakes, owls and coyotes are around wide awake. And on a lonely stretch of road in middle of nowhere, an armored truck full of advanced medical supplies drives alone. Then the truck quietly takes a right turn down a dirt road to a highly-lighted facility guarded by barb-wire fences and the truck was stopped, then approved to drive through the check point. Inside this mysterious building is a science lab, but what they design is so top secret, no one (and I mean no one) knows what they're making or what the agenda is, but they heard wild stories on what goes on in that facility. And being the Palm Springs area where old but "young looking" celebrities and large numbers of retirees live, the two things are well...connected in that sense of relevance. The truck has parked, two white-suited men come out of the truck, and went to open the back door to carefully bring out the boxes of this formula. As they cautiously carried the boxes, a strange looking old man opens the warehouse door and he invites them over, but the two men had to go and return to their office. "So...Mr. um, Dr. Plastic?" they asked, and the strange kooky old man said "That's me...I'm the youngest looking old man and I'm 98 years old." The two scientists are like "WOW...what's the catch?" But the doctor was like "I can't tell you...give me the boxes and just get outta here...or else". And the two men complied, gave the boxes full of these age-defying (or should it say "age-denying") supplies. "I hate old. I work in the entertainment business. I'm in my vision, desire and quest, to create a super-race of very beautiful and perfect people. Then I take control of the world, and decide who's superior or not. This is what I always wanted!..." and he breaks out into a mad laughter. * to be continued * |
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| Eienkiey - DeMallRAT | May 4 2007, 11:45 AM Post #2 |
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cool!!! weeee!! i likec it alot but wheres the spiez? they cum later?          
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| ~Ana Alex's Fan~ | May 4 2007, 12:06 PM Post #3 |
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| Mike D 27 | May 5 2007, 06:58 AM Post #4 |
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...from the Desert...
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Oh yes...chapter 1 is coming on TSUG, so be patient and hold on to your seats! 
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| Mike D 27 | May 6 2007, 08:41 AM Post #5 |
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== Chapter 1 == Beverly Hills High, Friday, 3:00PM PDT The school bell rings to announce the end of the day (or week), our 3 heroines Alex, Clover and Sam are relieved to leave the classroom and ventured out front of the campus. They had an usual 'girl talk'. "We're glad it's over" said Clover, "This calls for a mental vacation". "Of course, I have planned on a weekend drive to Palm Springs" Sam replies, and she gets out a trip brochure from her back-pack. "Cool, Palm Springs is where is at!" Alex said with excitement. "What...ever. It's like...old people right?" said Clover in sarcasm. "Not really, there's a hot party scene where I guess we're lucky to bump into a few studs" Sam said, then sighes and looks upward. "hhmm...I can't hold myself! Wowee-zowee!" Clover starts to drift off. "Hey guys..." Alex waves her hands over Sam's and Clover's eyes, "did we figure out a motel to stay at?", Clover told Alex "what is it now?" Sam pops out of it :" Oh sorry, how dreamy. I have and it's in a 1950's nostalagic spot called the 'Pink Flamingo' resort, by Indian Canyon. I read about it and celebrities spend their time there. I learned there's a hot water spa used to rejuvenate elderly tourists, alot of them happen to stay, and the spa was said to work wonders like a fountain of youth." Clover was bored and put on her CD walkman, Alex appears interested in the brochure. "And here's a club a block away, good food and lots of dancing. That will boost our spirits, not just the health spas". said Alex. "What else we like to do for the weekend?" Sam thought. "I don't know, all the school work and studies drained my head dry" said Alex. Sam turned to Clover and took off her walkman "Clover? You didn't listen at all. The motel room, 18+ dance clubs and our cruise downtown?" Clover was surprised..."Yeah, like tell me something I don't know." Sam told Clover what she said to Alex, "Ok...enough. I got to head home, call me back tonight on the travel arrangements." said Clover. But all of a sudden, the sidewalk caves in and the girls fell down the hatch...to where else? WOOHP HQ. "I think Jerry was well-informed" said Sam in shock. *chapter 2 follows * |
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| MetroNorthMallRat | May 6 2007, 07:22 PM Post #6 |
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Cool story so far!!!  I'm really looking forward to more, keep up the good work Mike D :grin:
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| Mike D 27 | May 8 2007, 09:19 PM Post #7 |
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== Chapter 2 == WOOHP-under the earth's surface, Friday, 3:15PM PDT. Our spies had a "crash landing" on the floors of the spy agency's HQ, when Jerry greets as usual "Well...my fellow spies, what can I do for you?" and the three replies "Yes Jerry!". Clover was irritated "Jerry, the goin down the chute is...so 5 minutes ago? You never paid attention to my limo idea." Jerry replies "I'll think about that, if I can pay the limo expenses. WOOHP is on a tight budget. And this mission has a high cost". Sam looks at the telescreen above Jerry's desk "Who's these pretty ladies? Are they movie actresses? and models? They are nearly as young like us." said Sam. "Well...that relates to the mission. But here's the catch...their ages aren't what you think they are. They are in their 100's!" Jerry said that to make the spies' eyes open and hair fly upward. "You're kidding! I don't understand, tell us about it". said Alex. "It's a super-secret anti-aging formula used rarely by the modeling industry and most of their clients are actresses, obsessively concerned on their looks and had consulted this scientists, also a test patient older than me...no pun intended." said Jerry, clicks on the remote and the face of Dr. Plastic appears. "You mean he's older than you? I can't tell the difference" said Clover. "I believe anyone with scientific knowledge can do anything they put their minds into, but what makes him a threat to us all?" said Sam. Jerry tells the spies in a sad but serious voice "Dr. Plastic has a grudge against aging, despite he's a centenarian and he strongly shown an odium on how people aged and looked. He has a sinister outlook like any madman, and he dreamt of a world where everyone never technically ages and rules over the 'ugly' or 'old' ones. He needs to be stopped, and you spies are the most qualified I can trust to defeat this freak". "oh yeah, we're in" Clover said cheerfully, but Alex replies "What a self-hating old man, if that's the nice way to put it", and Sam questions the mission "Thanks and we're all over it. But we booked a trip to Palm Springs on this weekend, and you're positive on knowing our plans?" Jerry turns his head and said "oh...his secret lab is located a hour from there, and the Palm Springs area is his favorable market for 'active adults', also known as 'heaven's waiting room'. But his diabolical scheme is rather hellish and Dr. Plastic is manipulating a gullible demographic on his promises for younger, prettier and BETTER people. You think Beverly Hills is the only place for him, but he's an antisocial and one of those nuts you find living out in the desert...actually, this is inside the lab, his mechinations and what he's up against. " Jerry changes the screen to security camera footage of what goes on the secret lab, and finds Dr. Plastic working on his experiment with a 12-year old dog (or 98 in human years)...his tests worked not for the tested animals' advantage, but the dog is in great health for its' age. Sam nearly cried "What a sad, sad, SAD man. What can we do to stop him?" Clover thinks about it "I thought I worry on how young, thin or pretty I looked." and for Alex, "how can we enter his secret lab without being caught?" Jerry opens his desk drawer and hands out the girls three new gadgets to use: Alex has an eyelash brush that's actually a 'tear gas' module to throw at the guards, while Clover gets a nail flier, but adjust the sharpness and you get a knife to cut through chain-link face, and Sam has a pair of running shoes that can fly a few feet, almost like small rockets attacked to your feet. "Now girls be careful on the mission, well...I said this hundreds of times." said Jerry, a concerned, experienced leader of the agency he headed for many years. "We know Jerry, we will." the spies said together in unisom. Jerry in a joking way "you girls are young enough to handle the trip...and I never cared much on beauty or what the media promotes anyway." Sam smiles and blushes "Absolutely. Let's teach Dr. Plastic on not toying with nature. And his clients' looks are making me jealous. " But for Clover "Yeah, I may wish to be 18 like forever, but to be 108 and look this way is...creepy much?" And what Alex cares about "Anyone want to hop in the '65 mustang and head out? We got ourselves a working vacation". The spies returned to the spot in front of the high school, jumped into the sports car with travel bags (and mission gadgets), and took an onramp to I-10 on an eastward route to their mission. *chapter 3 follows* |
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| Mike D 27 | Jun 3 2007, 03:49 AM Post #8 |
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== Chapter 3 == Palm Springs, Saturday, 12:10PM PDT From the spies' shining yellow mustang, the scenery of the San Gorgonio Pass and thousands of wind-powered mills dot across the landscape is magnificent and gorgeous. Sam  who has a drivers license focuses on the road, while Clover  sits bored stiff saying "Are we there yet?" over and over, and Alex  expresses wonder at the breathtaking views "I love nature...why you're so quiet?" said Alex. "Nothing...I want to get into the motel and relax before we get into spy mission mode" Clover said, with a calm annoyed look.Sam takes an exit off the freeway and drives across a few sand dunes: Alex says "building sand castles in the mind" indicates she loved coming to the desert resort, Clover remarks "whatever...all I see is stupid piles of sand". Sam tries to focus harder as the winds blow hard enough for sand to reach her dashboard. Then all of a sudden, a small troll-like figure with a hunchback, jumps out of the dusty cloud with what looks like a paintball gun, and shouts "guess who's here?" Sam puts on her breaks as the white blobs of paint hits the window and since the mustang's sunroof is down, the spies got hit by each one to ruin their vacation apparel. The crazed man with the paintball gun laughs and turns around to walk "inside" the sand dune...he vanished into the mystical cloud of blowing dust. As the spies' mustang is off the road side, Sam analyzes the situation and made sure her friends' are all right. What the man did was considerably dangerous, but the mustang was customized to make it not only look good, but safer thanks to the mechanics in WOOHP and Jerry's long experience with his love of sports cars. Clover shreks in horror "UGH! I got white on my pink and green! He's gonna pay for it!", while Alex is mad but gets over it: "What a freak! I wonder this has to do with Dr. Plastic?". However, Sam waited until the winds died down and the mustang went back on track to their destination. The spies found a device that washes hard-to-get-rid-off stains (and thank goodness). A few minutes later, the spies find the famous "Palm Springs" city limit sign: Sam replied "we made it! Now to look for the motel." but Clover is self-absorbed in her daydreams of shopping, partying and guys! and Alex reads more on what's to see in Palm Springs. Alex mentions "Oh...did I mention I got family in the area? " and she brought up the fact Britney's  family is from a local Indian tribe who co-runs a huge casino. "At least we don't expect Mandy has a connection" said Sam with a laugh...but it all depends, since Mandy  likes parties and spas...who knows when she'll show up?As the spies glanced the shops and boutiques on Palm Canyon Drive, the Plaza where Hollywood celebrities had visited for 70 years and the mountains casted a cooling shadow...Sam asks Clover and Alex to look for a large pink flamingo sign in the distance, but Alex was paying attention while Clover sits idle with her left hand on her cheek. "Why you don't like this trip...boring much?" said Alex, and Clover looks back "Like...I'm soooo mellow, this looks like a dumb place." Alex blinks and her veins appear "Clover! That's rude of you and we're out-of-town and don't make these stupid statements, besides I have family here and you didn't know Britney is here too...she'll be waiting at the motel valet area." Then , Alex points in front of Sam's face: "Look, I see a flamingo!", but Sam is like "Ok but you needa tell me, not point it out AT my face." The yellow mustangs pulls into the famous motel's parking lot and checks in a motel room for 3 guests. Note: And that's not all...I'm working on the plot for what they do in the motel and any further encounters with villains...because the spies are watching them! *chapter 4 follows* |
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| Agent Oddball | Jun 3 2007, 03:51 AM Post #9 |
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This is the fan fic your writing you told me about at WOOHP. Well its a great story. |
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| Mike D 27 | Jul 2 2007, 06:04 PM Post #10 |
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== Chapter 4 == At the Pink Flamingo Motel, Saturday, 1:50PM PDT Inside the keen looking motel lobby, the spies come to the hotel clerk desk: "We want a room for three." The concierge, an old looking man turn his head and saw the three "hot" girls. He was about to cry: "Oh...I wish I was your age. You're the hottest looking gals I ever saw". Sam replied "thank you. But about the room?" The old man muttered "yes...we got an opening on 13-A to the left wing, first floor, right by the pool". He gave the keys to Clover, who made poor Alex carry all the spies' luggage. Alex tells her "you will pay me a big tip...lazy much?". The spies talked about the old man "wow...he really liked our figures" said Clover in amazement, but Sam said "well, the problem is we should cherish our youth while it lasts." Alex replies "I gotta be strong...all the luggage...for a thin little girl? Clover? You and I need a talk". Clover looks back and says "what-ev-er". She opens the hotel suite to see two beds...and they pick straws on who gets the sleeping bag for the night. But Clover gets the sleepybag! "Ok...Sam in the left, Alex on the right". said Sam, while Alex laughs back at her sweet revenge. When they got settled and need to figure out their weekend plans, the spies sit on one of the beds to chat...but a small suspicious "mini-camera" disguised as a telephone "light" begans to slowly shift "head-on". While Sam and Clover are conversing, Alex notices the unusual pattern of the light turns right at her! Slowly, Alex stares at it...and decides to unplug the phone! "whew...that's freaky". But Sam wanted to use the phone to call the local bar for reservations..."how come it don't work?" said Sam, "yeah...how lame is a phone that doesn't work?" replied Clover. But a blushing Alex just hands Sam cell phone...or is the spies being tracked by a satellite in space? "Oh the plug is broken" Clover points out. "Sam, I have a feeling we're being watched...and careful on what we saying" said Alex. Before Sam can dial, the cell phone rang..."I'll answer. May be Jerry...or Britney." She greets "Hello?" a voice similar sounding to the old man said "I know who you all are. I got you!" and the spies noticed someone taping the hotel window. Clover is like "Golly...whatdayawant?" but it turns out to be the same old man from the hotel clerk desk. Sam was like "OK...quit playing your games. I think you're one LAMO or sent here to stop our mission". But for Alex, despite the dangerous move she chose, opened the hotel door and clunched to the man like a cat catching a mouse. "Who are you?" said Alex. The old man was holding a memory-tazer at her head: BAM. Alex was frozen (like a coma), then Clover and Sam ran for her, but the old man got away. "Oh no! Is she gone?" said Clover...but Sam takes her pulse and said "No...she got hit. This is the work of Dr. Plastic...and we're gonna party hard alright...spy-style!" * chapter 5 follows * |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Jul 24 2007, 05:57 PM Post #11 |
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Mike. Like I said, I'll see what I can do to help you on this little story. What kinds of ideas are you looking for? If you want too, put yourself into the story. |
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| Lisannah | Jul 25 2007, 12:45 PM Post #12 |
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Awesome fanfic, Mike D 26! NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE! |
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| Mike D 27 | Jul 26 2007, 02:01 AM Post #13 |
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Thanks Lisannah, an interesting look in where I live too...and SpieDude106 wants to assist in my fan fic like I have on his (what friends are for).
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| Mike D 27 | Sep 6 2007, 09:37 PM Post #14 |
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Oh here it is...long time since I continued the fan fic, where I left off Alex is in a coma and the other spies (including Britney) are hot on the trail for Dr. plastic. Edited for improvement in grammar and direction of story line. == Chapter 5 == Desert Valley Hospital, 2:30PM PDT. The ambulance has arrived in the valet and Alex in a comatose state was rushed to the emergency room. Doctors and nurses rush frantically to ensure if Alex is alive, but she's breathing and has a pulse. Clover was about to cry, asks one doctor, a man named Dr. Nathan Kwan, who specializes in neurology: "Oh god...tell me doc, what will happened to Alex?" said Clover. The doctor gasped and announced the bad news: "Alex has suffered great brain trauma by the lazer ray. I've been doing her cat scans though, and shall I tell you what else I found in her mental health record? Sam's eyes blinked and her mouth dropped, but Clover was in shock: "Her mental, what? Like she ain't a wacko? We're best friends and have the right to know." Dr. Kwan slowly announces what he found. "Alex has asperger's syndrome, a high functioning form of autism. She should have above-average intellect but it affects her maturity level, but not child-like or anything of the sort." Sam tells Clover: "Her brain is build or processed differently than most people. She's a very nice, warm person and likes to play athletic sports for our high school. Alex doesn't deserve to be a vegetable for the rest of her life." Clover responds in doubt: "Yeah, she's more like regular, not counting tooth picks or that sort of thing." And Sam says "she was a special ed. student, has the right educational training and behavioral therapy. But she does act peculiar or gets easily confused, thus it may explain her clumsiness." Dr. Kwan explains more on Alex's mental disability: "Over time, an Asperger's patient exposed to their environs can learn or absorb like everyone else, except it may be harder for Alex, like to make friends...though you girls are her friends. She's able to function on her own, with support of family and society." In the waiting room, the girls are surrounded by very old, demented patients who have Parkinsons and Alzheimers. One man in his 80s slowly walks into the door in his crutch, assisted by a young black woman, an in-care worker nurse. Dr. Kwan shifts his head back to the girls: "You have to be very fortunate for you currently in the state of youth. These are sufferers of mental conditions that wiped their virtual memories, including the most important ones of family, life events and who they are." Clover gasped in sympathy "that's soooo sad." But Sam told Dr. Kwan: "yes it is, but when will Alex recover from her head trauma?" Dr. Kwan said "It's unknown at this time, but her young mind is what we ought to cherish." And who approaches the spies...it's Britney! "Hey...I'm terribly sorry on what took place in the motel." Sam and Clover hugs Britney and Dr. Kwan says "I have to get going to assist other patients. Good luck to Alex and may the rest of your vacation is something to remember...young girls." Britney unholds the spies and goes "what he said about young girls?" Sam thinks of it carefully: "Yeah...he talks about old people's minds deteoriorating by old age. And Alex is ... can you tell Britney?" Clover refuses "What he said about Alex isn't allowed to share, please respect Alex's wishes whenever she awakes...or if she remembers squat." Sam smacks her face with her left hand in agony, worried about a fight may break out. Britney gets tense and said "Clover! Watch it. Alex told me about it not long ago. Autism isn't a shameful thing or being weird." Then Clover stares hawk-eyed at Britney: "I never say such a thing, please. You got to chill...much". said Clover. Sam gets in between at the middle and suggests the two to make up. "Alrighty, we need to leave this depressing place. I think we got some vacationing to do, Alex will recover in a deliberate speed." Clover, Sam and Britney walk out and what they saw was miraculous: the old man in crutches is no more...or quite younger. "What? Is that the same man?" as Clover whispers into Sam's ear. Britney ponders if this is correct. Sam thought even deeper in amazement: "Is this the work of Dr. Plastic? And Dr. Kwan...the talk of young people's brains are active, and the old people...is Alex now a guinea pig?" The three girls run towards the hospital door and was escorted by a large-sized female security guard. "Hold it right there." and her hands holds Clover and Sam. Britney brings out her video-cam and has a word with Jerry: "Oh god, Jerry! Alex is gonna lose her mind...in an old person's body. We have to stop it!" The spies (Clover, Sam and Britney) managed to fight off the security guard and Sam taken her clothing uniform. Clover and Britney quietly followed the men to a large minivan to resemble an ambulance. Sam wants to dig deeper into one of Dr. Plastic's wild bio-engineering schemes. * Chapter 6 follows* |
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| Mike D 27 | Nov 12 2007, 05:50 PM Post #15 |
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Oh lord, I hafta get it finished. Sorry for being distracted and unable to get the fan fic to move along. Note the references to changing population statistics in Europe and North America, as they depend on immigration from third world nations and a need for higher birth rates or more younger people. Dr. Plastic wants to take care of that...and how's he working on the solution?  == Chapter 6 == towards Desert Hot Springs, 4:00PM PDT Clover and Britney drove an unmarked green car across Indian Canyon Drive to a secluded warehouse, a drab metallic building with an empty flagpole in the front. Clover tries to steer the wheel easily, while Britney examines her info. about the possibility of a secret cloning facility. According to the info., Dr. Plastic has an obsessive fascination with cloning and he wants to perform his task to create hundreds from one person. "What's with this fruitcake sob?" said Britney, but Clover replies "whatever his problem is, I found the facility and that van with Alex. I'm worried what they do to her." The van pulls up and the men takes Alex, quietly unconscious with a tube in her nose and IV in her right arm. Clover and Britney rushes in "Hold it right there!" shouted Clover, she points a lazer at one man, while Britney does the same to another. The two men drop the crotch and tries to scuffle the two. After a few punches and swift kicks later, the men found themselves defeated and willingly cooperates. But the men actually are interested to offer a sneek peek no outsider can get near. "You two girls are so...strong. Dr. Plastic will need your strength and more of you, but you wanna see what he's planning on?" said the taller man. Clover says "Fuck yeah." followed by Britney "will you show us?" The smaller man said "Alex needs not to lay outside in the heat. Bring her inside in the swamp cooler section, those are non-electrical coolers...we're trying to conserve power at this time." Inside the building is a strange world of sci-fi fantasy becomes reality. The few incubators of hundreds of cloned human fetuses...of Dr. Plastic, as he purposedly copied himself. "Totally Freaky!" said Clover. "I wanna know why he created human clones?" The two men look back and the taller man said. "He worries about the white race become extinct by aging and immigration, he's one racist bigot you know". Britney gasped and looks at the clones. "He's stupid to be afraid of people of color, and about the majority of white people are older or not having much kids." For Clover, she gets Jerry to explain in further detail on demographics in western countries, which are indeed a large portion are older and another is foriegn-born. "Dr. Plastic is very interested in Clover. His ideal of a white Aryan blonde beauty puts her in danger, so I rather have you hide in this cellar. Or here...put on the safety masks to disguise you...he won't think you're in here." For Britney she ponders why he wanted Alex, who was Hispanic and Chilean, but that's a whole other reason. Then in a moment, one near-developed male clone tapped on the glass container and coughed, stratched it and his eyes stared back at her. Britney shrieked and knocked over an electronic control panel...off. The lights are off, the sirens turn on loud...and Clover conversed with Jerry on what's with Dr. Plastic's unrationality. "Oh shit, time to run, put on the suits and get outta here." The two men left with them...and Clover said "What about Alex?" Britney ran inside with her flashlight and she spotted again, the hutchbacked man grinning  and with a tear gas can thrown at her. KABOOM!Clover saw the interior lights turn back on (still afternoon) and the sirens stopped. When she arrived, Britney is gone...and Alex too. One clone, unclothed and unable to speak was howling at her! "AAACCCKKK!" Clover reacts out of morbid fear and she grabbed him down, as well tied him on the ground. In a moment, she tells herself. "Britney...Alex...and god hope Sam isn't putting herself in danger." Clover walks out the warehouse and the two men accosted her to the van, driving them to the very secret lab where Dr. Plastic does his secretive scientific research. "I got to save Alex and Britney out of harm's way!" said Clover. * chapter 7, heads back to the hospital where Sam is spying on the medical work* |
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| Mike D 27 | May 30 2008, 07:22 PM Post #16 |
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...from the Desert...
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Sorry for the long delay, finally got it down and chapter 8 is around the corner (two chapters in one). == Chapter 7 == Desert Valley hospital, 5:50PM PDT Meanwhile in the hospital, Sam puts on a disguise as a nurse and heads over to the pediatric care unit where several ailing older patients await her urgent care. Sam thought "The PCU is the perfect place for Dr. Plastic's crazy age-altering techniques. I'm goin in to see what's up". Sam slowly walks down the hall with the tray of medicinal containers and unattached breathing tubes with oxygen tanks. She turns left and right to see nobody is watching, then walks in the PCU room. What she saw wasn't old people at all! About 6 men and 3 women in very good shape. They look like teens out of high school but in 1950'sish clothing, a scene as if the fountain of youth was spotted. Sam shakes her head in disbelief "this can't be the PCU, but...the room label. Dr. Plastic was here." One of the men goes "Hey cutie! does it feel great to be 19 again? I can lift this bed like I'm juggling...wanna see?" The other man said "Gimme some more of that, nurse." Sam was shocked out of her wits that Dr. Plastic might found a way to alter people from aging this good. "I can't believe it. You guys know he's gonna clone you all for his military super-men...uh, nevermind". All of a sudden, Dr. Kwan enters the room "Sam? It's you! Don't undermine my plot, I got something for you." He shots a dart into her left arm and Sam strifes in agonizing pain. But Sam feels a sudden hit of adrenaline and socks Dr. Kwan in the face. Sam gets out her net by pressing a button on her ring finger and Dr. Kwan was trapped like a caught fish. Sam smiles with her eyes down in pride "Ha! I got ya back, but the dart hurts and can't...get it...out. Oh...I'm so...sleepy".and Sam dozes in the floor. Then came three large men, all are either triplets...or clones built for super-strength, but gently takes Sam and Dr. Kwan to the back of the hospital loading area. A large white van drives directly to Dr. Plastic's lab. The driver was a swervy older man, possibly an Italian or Greek man, wears a large hat and sunglasses to hide his identity. He talks on a mobile visual phone device: "boss, we got Sam. That shot shall make her...infantile. Watch her be a spoiled lil' child. How's the Alex's brain scan going?" Dr. Plastic replies "Great job, comrades. I want you to find this agent, a young sweet blonde by the name Clover. Find her, made me use her for my experiment and soon there will be 50 of her. My plan shall not fail." == Chapter 8 == Dr. Plastic's secret lab, 7:30PM PDT Back in the secret lab, Alex awakes in a cold grey room surrounded by two men in medical gear, mask and glove. "Oh...where am I? Ow...my head hurts. It's been poked around. Who are you guys?" The two surgeons looked at her and not said a word. Alex was confused on all this, unable to sense she's now in Dr. Plastic's infamous lab, more like amnesia or awakened from a bump in her head. "I can't...remember a thing. Who am I? and what do you all want?" Then in a quick flash, Britney kicks open the surgery room door "Alex? It's us Britney and Clover." said Britney. "Take these two men down...we gonna save you my friend" said Clover, as she grabs Alex in her rolling bed. Britney throws a tear gas dispenser in the room and poof! the three run out of there. "Nobody can get us." Clover yells and Britney halts: "Oh no...the military clones blocked the exit." Three similar-looking men entraps the spies, creates a laser cage over the three. Then came a small grey alien being in lab gear and told the girls "You will be beamed to a whole other room." in subsequence, they were taken away beyond the normal limit of quantum physics. After the beaming, the three: Clover, Britney and Alex still not fully conscious is now gonna go face-to-face with Dr. Plastic. He turns around and faces them in his desk, his hands twittling and two of the super-soldier men again on his sides. The alien shows off Sam like they hadn't seen her before: a little infant, the dart made her alot younger. "What did you do to Sam?" said Clover in fierce anger. Dr. Plastic laughs in an insane evil manner. "The age-altering structure of the dart worked." he said, "now Clover will you come this way? Unlock the lazer cage, boys". The lazer cage is gone, and Clover was taken to another room, while Britney was zapped frozen by the alien's cooling ray. Alex asks "what is this? I can't...I'm trapped on the bed roller." Dr. Plastic explains to her "You have a brilliant mind, Alex. You can be the cure for memory loss. Sam may be smart, but now her IQ is that of a 5 year old...take her away to her playpin, I might want to use her next." Sam cries "I want mommy! No fair. You're mean", but Alex was trying to recognize her..."you remind me of ... Sam?" and she looks at a iced Britney. "Britney? What happened to her?" Dr. Plastic replies "She fought back and was defeated. Your friend Clover is highly valued for my work..." The grey alien walks up to her "Greetings. I'm FHS515, a member of the Zeta-Reticulian race who worked aside with Dr. Plastic since my space craft crashed in the desert in the 1960s. I assisted Dr. Plastic in my race's slow ability to age as we traveled through millions of light years to your planet, and I worked in what you call Area 51". Alex says "yeah...I believe in aliens and UFOs, but I don't believe Dr. Plastic's ramblings of a super-race of humans". The grey alien replies "Now you know too much, how about we erased it out of your head? Look at the light will ya?" Dr. Plastic said "No! We gotta have her. I uncovered this girl is a high school athlete...and look, her high-calorie diet is part of her regimen. I love a well-fed girl. Take her back to the room" The grey alien beams her, Dr. Plastic and himself for other errands to do. * chapters 9 & 10, the story continues...and more sci-fi references there* |
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