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| Spie Dude 106 | Aug 2 2007, 09:27 PM Post #1 |
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Once again readers, Mike D 27 and myself give you another efort. The plot involves a global war with NATO, the European Union, and a merger of Iran, Iraq, and several other arab nations into the United Islamic Arab Republic, after the President of Iraq is killed. This is the third in are series, this time around staring a second generation of super spies. In 2024, Israeil has joined NATO. The UIR's main goal is to take the Pursian Gulf. More coming. Mike, help me out when you can. Once we have a good lineup of heroes and villains, then I'll start it up. |
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| Mike D 27 | Aug 3 2007, 10:09 AM Post #2 |
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I thought of 3 other additions to the fan fic: * The U.S. is part of the North American Union which is also made of Canada and Mexico, the global superpower has acquired two neighbor nations into its' army. * Japan is attacked by a trilateral alliance of Russia, red China and North Korea. And * Pakistan invades India, both have advanced nuclear weapon capabilities. -And the names of the spies' children who are agents working for WOOHP.- *Patricia Lillain Michaels or "Patty", Sam's oldest of 2 girls. She is like her mom, the new WOOHP leader afer Jerry retired, in booksmarts and beauty. * Jennifer Bridget Michaels or "Jenny", is Patty's sister. At times, she serves as the substitute spy. Like their father Ryan, she's clever and protective of her friends. *Rosie Waldemar Evans, Clover's adopted daughter, has her same personality of a fashion freak, but wisely skilled in the latest gadgets and technology. * Alexander Haley Robertson, Alex's son acquired his Mom's athletic talent. Her other son/half-brother Tommy Haley Vasquez is on undercover missions, and her step-son Kelly Haley Bergman, is a NATO military strategist for WOOHP. * Mira Lea Selkirk, Mandy's daughter (and only child) is privileged and good-lookin, who finds her Mom Mandy abit overbearing and selfish, but is also a WOOHP agent. * And finally, Paul Wallace Cheng, is Britney's son. He's a rookie spy who needs guidance of Sam and the new spies, but he's gullible to cause some mistakes. Now for the geopolitical players in this fan fic: democracy vs. dictatorship. NATO nations: All of Europe except for Russia. Includes Turkey, Morocco, Canada/the US (North American union), Central America and the Caribbean nations. Their non-aligned allies are Australia/New zealand, India & South Africa. The UIR is consisted of 12 to 14 Islamic nations: Algeria, Egypt, Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, Lebanon, Libya, Oman, Qatar, Saudi Arabia, Sudan, Syria, Tunisia, UAE & Yemen. The EU has 600 million people, the UIR has 500 million and the NAU has 500 million. However, the new Russian Federation has 200 million with the help of China's 1.5 billion and a few rogue states in Africa (somalia) Latin America (cuba?) and Asia (vietnam), this can spell trouble to the world scene. It's up to the teen spies to follow their moms' paths to success beyond what diplomacy has fatally failed to acheive. |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Aug 3 2007, 10:51 AM Post #3 |
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Here's a list of villains. If you can come up with names, post them ASAP. Ihatola (Iran) General Secretary of the PRC. Premier of the Peoples Republic of China. President of the new Russian Federation. Now for the heroes list, other then WOOHP. U.S. President/NAU leader. EU President. Note: the religious leader in Iran is also the head of the UIR. |
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| Mike D 27 | Aug 4 2007, 09:53 AM Post #4 |
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Ihatola (Iran): Ras Abram Nassiri. General Secretary of the PRC: Jei Nang Pung. Premier of the Peoples Republic of China: Meong Zen Guie. President of the new Russian Federation: Nikolai Filitov. U.S. President/NAU leader: James Stevenson. EU President: Hans Kristen Kampaiine of Finland. Heroes and villains list not entirely decided. UIR bands itself with a terrorist group lead by Ahmed Al-Sabahiya, an Egyptian national who's a prototype of Al-Qaeda and its' leader Osama bin Laden. So I got the name of the main villain other than leaders of Iran, China and Russia. Also in the story describes how the UIR and NATO went to war, General Filitov's son is president of Russia who sought revenge against America (you read this on "Blind faith, hope, love"), and the spies' pairings like Jennifer falls in love with Alexander.  I'm not tryin to give out too much details before the fan fic is ready, but I gave an OK to spie dude to start the prologue. |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Aug 4 2007, 12:15 PM Post #5 |
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TS: Global Conflict. Prologue. Authors Note: this is just a set up of the type of future that the spies and their famlies live in. It had been almost 20 years since the group of original WOOHP Super Spies had been scent into Russia. It was now the year 2024. The future looked bright for the world. The North Atlantic Treaty Organization, or NATO, was much larger then it had been, now including the United States, Canada, Mexico, and most of Europe, save Russia. Ryan and Sam Michaels had had a second child, also a girl almost a year afther Patricia had been born. Sam was the new leader of the World Organization of Human Protection, or WOOHP. Clover had married an Austrian immigrant, with a very wealthy background. Due to her worring about giving birth and the effect it would have on her figure, they'd addopted a girl. Alex had married an up in coming baskitball player. They now had 2 sons (one of them was a half son), and a step son from one of her husband's first marriages. *Chapter 1 follows*, in which, we get some insite into the family lives of the spies, and meet their children. |
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| Mike D 27 | Aug 4 2007, 06:24 PM Post #6 |
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Good start, the intro of the now-grown up spies and their families.  I'm thinking a plot of how NATO goes to war and when Woohp is called to duty after foreign diplomacy proved fruitless. The UIR has a terrorist connection in some scenes, but will contain lots of talk on weaponry and military maneuvers.Edit: Ok I took my time and here's the beginning... == Chapter 1 == June 14, 2024, 15:00 hours PDT. As the telescreen clock announces the end of the 2024 school year, some things never change in Beverly Hills High, except the world has holograms, replacable bodies and space-planes can travel from L.A. to N.Y. in a matter of minutes. The students rush to their air-cars which shows how far we advanced in this futuristic scenario world. Three young girls, two sisters: Patty who can't wait to see her senior year, and Jenny walk out thorugh an escalator door. "Wow...school's over for us" said Patty, while Jenny breathes a sigh of relief: "You tellin me? Summer here we come! No more books, homework or teachers, dirty looks." Rosie enters the picture "Hey sisters! I'm heading to the new lake in the Carrizo desert, wanna come tomorrow?" The two agreed and said "Why not? It's gonna be a cool summer! I thought of a trip to the lunar colony, Cydonia is outta this world." Rosie blinks and goes "What? You're goin to the moon? You ahead of the curb." Alexander waves "Hey buddies...what's up?" the three replied "the sky". Patty remarks "...an one earth week at the lunar colony!" Jenny butts in " What were doin for summertime! Don't forget your toothbrush...nice smile". Alexander grins and said "thanks, wanna go to the soy-shake shoppe in Melrose Center?" Rosie and the Michaels sisters agreed, until... They were "beamed" without notice and in a few secs. at the WOOHP HQ, with Sam and their mothers present with shocking news that could spoil their kids' vacations. Sam, the agency leader, who's a cute 40 year old gal alerts what the spies don't like to hear...but the world is changing before their eyes. "Bad news. The president of Iraq was assassinated in a bomb attack in Beirut. We got word the UIR and China agreed to an alliance which has deadly results, while tensions between Russia and the North American Union. NATO spotted a rogue missile in Icelandic air space, might came from Russian naval carriers in the Norwegian sea, and..." Sam spoke in simple terms when she got interrupted. The TV screen which is now GLADIS' form has turned on to witness a wave of nuclear bombings across several European countries and world major cities: L.A. civic center was hit by a "dirty bomb" inside an air-car. People run in horror and for safety, while the spies look in astoundment of their teenage innocence is comin to an end. "Does this mean our vacation is cancelled, mother?" said Patty, while Jenny looks to her and said "You know sis, we been prepared to take on a role someday to save the world!" and Rosie with her crossed arms was sarcastic: "Why us??? It's unfair!" Clover walks to her daughter: "the UIR is ruled by a fanatical leader with enough nukes to bomb the world 4 times over: Ras Abram Nassiri, the ayatollah". Alexander worries about his future career as a boxer hangs in a balance and said "I'm fiercely angry at those terror punks. Why hurt innocent men, women and children of all that's holy? These cowards I wanna punch 'em til they're a bloody pulp. Sign me up to the agency, Mom" and Alex jumped out of her seat, "That's what I brought up my sons for...get ready, time to follow my footsteps". Sam, the librarian-by-night, agent-by-day granted the spies quick glance info. CDs, while Clover the fashion designer presented new spy outfits in shiny silver, but has different colors...and Alex, the PE teacher she is gave special energy pills to increase their stamina when bad guys have them surrounded. Sam says in her usual greeting brought by her late master Jerry: "farewell my dears". The newly-recruited spies are beamed to the middle of Tehran, the seat of the United Islamic Republic, but their moms forgot to tell them something: "You know they expect women to be covered in veils? said Patty. But Rosie unleashed her packbacks and say "here they are". The morals police found the spies unveiled, but Alexander studied enough Iranian..."I can talk to them, girls". Will the spies get arrested? or a confrontation breaks out? *chapter 2 follows* |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Aug 6 2007, 11:39 AM Post #7 |
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2 Same day, 7 PM. Sam returned home after a long day at work. Her husband of 18 years was waiting for her. The 2 greeted with a kiss on the lips, before they talked business. "You scent them to Tehran to try and find the guy who whacked the Iraqi President?", Ryan asked. Sam nodded, before giving a slight laugh due to him using the mob term 'whacked'. "We were in New York too long." She was refering to a vacation they'd taken some years ago. "Jimmy's a little concerned about the new guy who's running Russia." "Filitov?" It was Ryan's turn to nod. "I haven't told Clover this.", he continued, then dropped to a whisper, "He's the son of that guy who caught Clover." "I'm glad you didn't. Knowing her she'd go crazy." "The Japanese PM's pretty worried about North Koria. Their navy's been doing a lot of exercise near his part of the world.", Ryan said. "I'm considering sending Mira and Paul into Russia.", Sam told him. "It's your decision." "Japan's also been noticing a lot of fly by's by Russian and Chinese fighters. Those three could be up to something." "If they are, we'll be ready." |
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| Mike D 27 | Aug 7 2007, 11:28 PM Post #8 |
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Chapter 3 will be posted here shortly on Wed. I know this story is warming up to a "boiling point".  edit: Since Alexander is fluent in Iranian, the spies are taught languages in part of performing missions. Mira (Mandy's daughter) studied some Russian to get by...but Paul is in the process of learning Mandarin Chinese. Patty mastered Spanish, while Jenny knew abit of French and Rosie picked some German from her adoptive father. |
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| Mike D 27 | Aug 9 2007, 06:45 PM Post #9 |
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== Chapter 3 == June 15th. 6:00PM local time, Teheran Iran. After the altercation between the spies and the Iranian police, WOOHP agents Mira and Paul in Moscow, already on a mission to follow dictatoral president Filitov around, received a text message that Alexander and the girls were arrested and in a prison cell. Alexander was taken to an interogation room, while the girls had to take an "re-education" course on modesty and to be veiled whenever are in public. "I'm shocked they didn't wanna harm us" said Jenny, but Patty looked at it the other way "Yes, but they haven't discovered what we're in Iran for". Rosie was fretting on her "bedsheet" she called it, but over time she felt confident on Iranian men won't dare to ask her out: "You know, I'm not down for sharia or whatever, but the veil does cover my skin from the hot Persian sun". She loved the veil's dark blue color, despite she felt it wasn't necessary. In the police station, Patty looks around quietly to find a solid object to strike the police chief, who kept giving her sister Jenny, sinister grins. He started to carass her body and Jenny was frightened, then Patty decide to find a lamppost and smashed it on his head before he gets to unbutton Jenny's shining spysuit. In another room where Rosie was, three other officers arose from their seats and rushed to Patty and Jenny, defending themselves from the UIR cops. Rosie slowly left the room and in an attempt to go outside, someone awaited for him: A grey-haired but bearded cleric who has official entry to the police station. "Well, if it wasn't the WOOHP agents working for NATO. Guards, if any aren't beaten by a bunch of pillow-soft infidels, seize em!" said the unidentified cleric, supposedly the head of the UIR defense unit. They were hestitant to took a clutch and shackled the Michaels sisters, but Rosie pours out into the streets to Tehran. In a few blocks, everyone noticed a blonde looking westerner without a veil, and Rosie took out her de-centigrater lazer and began to shoot the cops into oblivion! But the particles get inside her lazer..."this is like catching fireflies". As she ran for her life, she thinks about Patty and Jenny, and on her mind was the mission. "What can I do to stop more nuclear attacks, bombings and kidnappings? The whole world is goin' nuts...and at war! But please may Alexander and the sisters are safe. But I noticed Jenny has a crush on Alexander...poor guy, but I bet his boxing skills and he's scot-free..." except Alexander is in a much worse situation. *chapter 4 follows* |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Aug 9 2007, 08:56 PM Post #10 |
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Chapter 4 Beverly Hills, California. (Mike, I'm not sure what the time difference is between Iran and the U.S. If you can help me with that, let me know.) It was around 7 in the morning, when Ryan was awakened by his cell phone. Wondering who in their right mind would call this early in the morning, he flipped it open. Rosie's number showed on the caller ID. "Yeah?", he asked. "Nothing." "Come again?" "We didn't even get a chance to find anything out. Pat, Jen, Xander, they've all been captured.", she said before breaking down. He told her to stay as calm as she could, and that they'd find a way out for her and the others as soon as possible. After he hung up, he was surprised to see his wife behind him. "How long have you been standing there?" "Long enough. If they do anything to them-", she started to say. Ryan cut her off. "We've got to keep faith. We'll make it through this." Sam was getting a text message from Arnold, who worked at WOOHP as a techi. "The Russians are moving.", it read. Ryan flipped on CNN, to see a broadcast from Japan. The country was under attack from Chinese, Russian, and North Korean forces. A Russian made 20 megaton bomb had destroyed the main airport in the Japanese capital. The world was coming to an end. *Chapter 5 follows.* |
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| Mike D 27 | Aug 11 2007, 02:44 PM Post #11 |
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== Chapter 5 == Meanwhile, it's 17:00 hours in Iran and sundown marks the last day of Ramadan, the holiest month of the Islamic calendar for Muslims around the world. Rosie is way ahead of the foot-troop UIR "morals" police, she pauses in a desolate corner to catch her breath. But, an old lady in a black veil approaches and gives her an "evil eye" and Rosie broke out in a sweat over her Persian blue head scarf. The old woman said "Americans are the worst people, I shall curse you". But, Rosie takes out her lazer-ray gun in disturbance: "What have my country done to you...go ahead to tell me what's wrong?" The old lady was a supporter of the 1978 ouster of the Shahist regime, when the Islamic radicals assumed power in Iran. "I was in joy to see the American pigs caged in hostage for 444 days." Rosie replied "America won't do the same to ANY ONE of your people in our soil. Beverly Hills itself has the largest Iranian expat community in the world. We allow them to do anything they want, and practice their religion in full freedom." What Rosie said is true and correct, however Rosie slowly calms down. The elder spoke of her opposition in reduction of women's rights: "But as a woman, I regret the loss of walking anywhere unescorted, was arrested twice for dressing too easy in public, and my formal education as a fashion designer was deemed illegal. I'm a fateful Muslim, but why can't I live the way I wanted?" Rosie puts down her lazer-ray gun: "I show full respect to my elders. My grandma fled communist East Germany in the 1980's, but her people not only took down the stone-ugly Berlin Wall. They enjoy more freedom and prosperity now denied to them for a long time. No country...and nobody shall lose their freedom. It's my duty to help you, my fellow sister of the world, to be a free girl again." The lady remarks "I'm so old you know, but I have faith and self-esteem, and a sense to continute living long, the holy bless his name." Rosie smiled and took her hardened, but moist left hand...it was dotted with henna, an ancient body art like a tattoo used by women in that part of the world. But in a second, the Michaels sisters Patty and Jenny beamed into the street and exactly found Rosie. "You're alive" said Patty, while Rosie is "What? you got out of jail?" Jenny said "Self-explanatory. I have the coordinates to the UIR-funded terror training camp." Alexander disintegrated the 'so 20th century' window jail bars and he's on the way 400 miles east to the Afghani border. "Rosie, we need to beam ourselves to Beijing, China in 2 minutes. You're gonna meet Alexander right here." said Patty, but suddenly a small military police jeep appeared. Rosie slowly comes to the jeep and tries to play "nice and sweet", as the driver was mesmerized: She socks him at the crotch and heads over to the jeep fast. The old lady raises her head in quiet approval and leaves. *chapter 6 follows* |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Aug 12 2007, 10:07 AM Post #12 |
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6 8:AM, Beverly Hills. "Thank God.", Sam breathed. She'd just recieved word that her daughters and the others had broken out of Iran and were on there way to China. Just then, her phone rang. It was Sergei Golovko, the head of Russia's WOOHP branch. "Samantha, I would say it is good to hear from you under the circumstances." "Same to you. Do you know what the real plan is?" "Not completely, however, the UIR appears to want capture of the Pursian Gulf. That would give them control of over half the world's oil." "Your country is in league with them, but tell me Sergei Nikolayovich, what can your part of WOOHP do for us?" "Niether of our governments know this organization exists, no?" "That's true." "Then I shall scend my finest agents into your service." *Chapter 7 follows*. |
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| Mike D 27 | Aug 14 2007, 07:15 PM Post #13 |
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Spie dude wants to write a follow-up of Mira and Paul in Russia, while chapter 7 focuses on Rosie enters a hidden terror training camp. == Chapter 7 == 600 miles east of Tehran, Iran. 23:00 hours/11:00PM local time. After a long dusty drive on a few twisted roads through the dasht-e-kavir and the numerous mountain ranges, Rosie drives the military police jeep for hours at a time and the lack of proper roadside lighting made the drive a dangerous one. Rosie was about to pull over for a night's rest, until she notices a brightly-lighted facility...tents, more jeeps and sounds of semi-automatic rifles shooting into the air, and located right where the Afghanistan border is. Rosie turns left and drives down a gravel road, her military uniform and head scarf should make it impossible for identification. She ponders whether the facility, not found on any maps, is the UIR terror base for undercover planning for terrorist attacks. The border isn't fenced and there was no guard, just a few tents surrounding what looks like a hill...with a few caves possibly to hide weapons. Rosie stops her vehicle and steps out quietly, "I know it's right on the money" thought Rosie, and when she looks both ways before walking through: "I just hit the right target". A few seconds later, two sandblasted tan jeeps came to her and stopped, and two bearded men in traditional Afghan garb with disintegration rays intimidate her. "Are you part of the UIR? Password! or last words!" said one man, while the other man who may be his brother or cousin, takes out his stun-gun onto Rosie. She's thinking of a certain Iranian revolutionary term taught by Alexander, but she used an Arabic term she learned, was a serious insult to their manlihood. The two men took off her scarf and discovered was a blonde American woman! But not to fear: Rosie slams the two men face to face and ran over their backs, and went inside one of the caves she thought would assure her safety. She calls Patty and Jenny, whom reached Tiananmen square in Beijing, China (it's 4AM there) to announce she's alright: "Eagle to nest!" said Rosie in codetalk. Patty replies "Ok...we're thinking of ways to enter the People's secretary office, but we can't be caught and what we know Chinese police are very brutal against seditionists and spies. " Jenny cuts in "Pardon me, sis. Our Mom told us we have to go undercover as North American Union diplomats." But, Rosie noticed a very old Arab-looking man with a burning torch surrounded by a pack of goons, whom are his crazed fanatic followers, some are armed and dangerous. Rosie turns off her video-cam and attempts to find a hiding spot in the darkest part of the cave. But she'll peep behind the wooden crates, stockpiles of biological and nerve gas...and possibly a batch of the ebola virus. As she overhears the secret "agreement" as the old man spoke of dealings with the Filitov regime...and how the WOOHP agents are covering their trails. The man remarked "see this pic? Her name is Clover Evans. The SVR took her hostage 20 years ago and she nearly turned to our side. But WOOHP released her and only time will tell, her daughter Rosie Waldemar, also an agent, will follow suit". Rosie found out her mom was kidnapped by the same people now in charge of Russia...and are assisting the UIR to seek for Rosie. The old man was a co-head of the terrorist camp and as Rosie watches quietly to listen on the conversation, she tries not to jump out and kill these bad guys...full of rage on what they done to her Mom a long ago. The group of men decided to head back to camp, complete their final Ramadan meal since an observing muslim can't eat or drink in daylight hours on that month and get a full night's rest. Rosie slowly leaves the cave and thoughts rushed in her mind: "I must not loose myself...or allow my free young mind to be captured or manipulated. Thank heavens my Mom's friends saved her in Russia". *chapter 8 follows* |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Aug 15 2007, 11:13 AM Post #14 |
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8 It was close to 10 in the morning when Paul and Mira arived in Russia to meet in private with Golovko. "The alliance that we have formed with the Peoples Republic of China is an uneasy one at best.", Sergie told them in his office. "You don't trust them?", Mira asked. "Not completely, but we have no choice as of yet." "A friend of ours is in Tehran. She tells us this UIR might want to try a bio warfare attack on the NAU.", Paul said, remembering what Rosie had found. "That is simply madness." Golovko made a phone call and was talking for a few minutes, before returning to his guests. "Some experts in this method of attack will be scent into Tehran to hopefully destroy these weapons before they can be used." *chapter 9 follows* |
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| Mike D 27 | Aug 16 2007, 07:07 PM Post #15 |
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Why the story gets further interesting, and seems like Paul and Mira aren't gettin' along. == Chapter 9 == Beijing, China In a blink of the eye, Patty and Jenny find themselves in China. "Why we didn't need to dig a hole in the ground to get here" said Patty in a joking manner, Jenny is going through her electronic notepad "We are supposedly stock brokers from New York on a summit to discuss new trade policies". The country in the year 2024 is now the world's largest economy and nearly prosperous to match the wits of American middle-class life. But the country's government is pressured to meet the needs of countries who hold a disdain for capitalism. "But when the US goes to full-blown war with China" said Patty, "the Chinese will further fund and train the world's largest able-bodied population for military suscription...and their nuclear weaponry programs, look at their latest threat on Japan." added Patty. Jenny reads e-news devices with a slanted view of a devastated Tokyo and how the Russians dispatched 10,000 soldiers on Kuril Islands, a doorstep to Hokkaido, the northernmost island. "That's horrible...but the chinese press under strict state control interprets the Japanese and NATO are greedy war-mongers". Behind the girls is a short, but muscular Chinese police guard, as the newsstand faces the Interior secretary office. "Excuse me, show your passes. You are very likely to appear American. We declared war on America and Europe. I need to see your pass or we're retailiating right at the moment." The girls smiled, perspired abit and slowly picks their super-tight rope..."Yeah we do!" In a few seconds, the police guard was already tied. But a micro-cam caught the incident...and they were surrounded. Patty ran to the interior secretary office and Jenny threw a "hand clutch", a classic woohp weapon to the building's top. Jenny broke through the window and what she met was the Secretary of defense minister, Jai Chin Hyun. "What are you doin' here?" Jenny recognized him from the telescreen photo on the e-news stand. "You're going to destroy America! For all what America has done to improve your economy...why you backstabbed us?" Hyun spoke calmly and diligently: "China is poised to guide the world to a new age when socialist third world countries lead the way. We never based our economic principles on class and we never turned against basic social traditions, much like our Muslim brothers and sisters in the UIR." Patty barged into his office and demanded Hyun to get in contact with North Korea, whose 600,000 troops are escapading into south Korea in any moment. "We are from WOOHP, an independent spy agency but were sent abroad to prevent the UIR-Russian-Chinese alliance. To solve any problem in a manly way...er, we are girls, but in a humanly way...is never throw bombs or nuclear devices". Hyun was again amused and asked "The Russians knew to single-handedly deal with you guys. WOOHP aren't qualified not only to handle world affairs...like we the people's republic, but you're under corporations and an outdated puritanical bourgeoise rule mindset you Americans have...will seize to exist in 24 hours". Patty and Jenny was foretold by Hyun on a number of American targets in east Asia: embassies, company offices and cultural relics, will get bombed shortly by North Korean and Afghani agents, trained by Islamic terror cells and the ailing but clever Russian red army. "Look, Mr. hyun...What you're doing is a real conspiracy" said Patty. In a second, Jenny glanced at the ceiling and thought about the threat of global war in every country or hemisphere...and millions of innocent lives at stake. Hyun said "We are the people and our public opinion favors our policies and goals. Now you naive Americans came to believe democracy...is a people's government." Jenny clutches her fist and sock Hyun in the face. Patty yells "What are you doin? You gonna get us in serious trouble. The chinese legal system will beat the shit out of us." Jenny looks at a knocked-out Hyun and explains to Patty: "The whole world is gonna fall to the hands of commies, terrorists and neo-fascists...all because we are the people's government." Patty turns to Jenny and asks what she heard of Alexander: "Is it true you're in love with Alexander?" Jenny admits: "Yeah. What became of him in Iran is unknown. I want to save him before it's too late." The Michaels sisters left the people's secretary office pretending to be stockbrokers, each one with suitcases and cell phones, pretending to made a new offer in front of others. * Chapter 10 follows * |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Aug 19 2007, 02:44 PM Post #16 |
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10. It was getting towards evening in Moscow. Currently, Paul was roming the streets, looking for Mira. She'd gotten a message from WOOHP some hours ago, and he hadn't seen her sinse. He walked towards one of the many bars along one street. He scanned the crowd, when he managed to make out what sounded like crying coming from a corner table. Mira was slumped over the table she was at, her eyes glazed over and red from tears. He took out a breath annalyzer. She was almost drunk by American standards. Something had to have really shaken her up, he thought. He took out the special communication devices the agents used nowadays. It could transfer one message from one to the other. He checked her's for the last one she'd gotten. "Oh my God.", he breathed. Xander's half-brother, Tommy (AKA Tom), had been involved in various undercover missions. His last known station was in Ukraine. There had been an attack by the UIR in Kiev, with few fatalities to NATO's side, but several injured troops. Tom was one of the victims. He had been shot, and was now in a coma at the closest hospital. Paul had heard roomers about him and Mira being a couple, but this confirmed it completely. *Chapter 11 follows* |
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| Mike D 27 | Aug 30 2007, 12:50 PM Post #17 |
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I forgot to complete this!  But here's where the story left off:4 hours later (2AM Moscow time) : Inside a hotel room where Paul and Mira are staying, she awoke from her drunken stupor. "What happened? I'm back in the hotel room." Paul was carrying a herbal tea to relieve her hangover and he says "You look beautiful though", but Mira took it sarcastically: "well...if you say so". Paul glances at her nearly-open eyes and tells her: "You know, when we started the mission...I developed a sense that I have feelings for you, Mira". She responds "oh wow, I never knew YOU Paul has a sensational romantic trance. I get lots of boys asking me out, but I see how they were cold and stupid." As she sips her warm sweet tea, Paul kept cooing and flirting, until he finally opens his heart and mouth: "I love you, Mira...you were a dear girl to me in class and the mission and may we be together forever." Mira and Paul nearly leaned towards each other for a long kiss, until a stranger broke through the windows, dressed in dark camoflauge gear and went over to the couple in bed. He zaps their heads with his brain-freeze lazer and the couple was frozen, then he got a group of 3 other men along and took them out the hotel through the window. Paul and Mira was taken aboard on an unmarked space car, and one of the men contacted on his videocam to ... president Filitov: "Mr. President, they all yours". Filitov said "What about the other spies? We got this planned accordingly. Get me the Michaels sisters and Rosie, who's a little runt like her mom was long ago." The unmarked vehicle landed in front of the Kremlin, already guarded in case of an aerial attack by NATO/NAU space bombers. The president recently announced he declared war on the EU and NAU, already informed the Finnish president also head of the EU on Russian troops are advancing to the Finnish border. * chapter 12 follows * |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Sep 2 2007, 11:23 AM Post #18 |
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12 President of the United States and the North American Union James Stevenson was in a meeting with the secretaries of state and defense. "In theory ser, NATO has a fighting chance depending on what tacktics the UIR uses against us." "Our main objective should be to either capture or kill our Ayatollah 'friend'." "Ser, I recommend sending a strike force into Finland to help protect the Finish-Russian border. Their own defense minister tells me that Russian troops are moving in." "Aproved." *chapter 13 follows* |
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| Mike D 27 | Sep 4 2007, 10:53 PM Post #19 |
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- Chapter 13 - Beijing, China: 10AM local time Back in China, Patty and Jenny in their undercover business outfits, decided to enter a defense weaponry corporation, ChinCo, which specializes in development of defense weapons and anti-matter explosives used in wars to vaporize soldiers in battle. Already they got the permission by ChinCo, since WOOHP made a clever "official" appointment and gave the two spies clearance into the corporate office. "What you look at that? The chinese economic miracle at work." said Jenny. "We're here to meet Marcy Antona Pirelli, the Italian-born developer...and find a way to make contact with top secret negotiations with Russia and the UIR". added Patty. At the meeting door that fades to open or close, Ms. Pirelli, an 50-something gray-haired woman with warts and wrinkles all over her face, glances at the two girls. "Hello, you know me by my business card. It's a pleasure to meet you two. You're sent here to get the scoop on explosive profits?" Patty said "Yes Ms. Pirelli, this is what we're all for." Patty chips Jenny's shoulder and she remarks with laughter "Absolutely. Bam! The world is at war, and chinco is all prepared for it." Ms. Pirelli invites them to her office table for a discussion. Unaware the two girls are spies, Pirelli gives top secret info. and Patty got out her tiny audio recorder out of her purse and looks like an engagement ring. Jenny asks "What's the catch? Why you want chinco's factories and ammo plants to take part in a massive attack on America?" Pirelli, who suddenly lost her track of conversation..."you girls asked more than you should know". Afterwards, the building security guard barged in, a heavy set man in red army uniform said "These are woohp agents, not stockbrokers. Get these girls." Patty and Jenny got out their chairs and placed each chair on his body to trapped him, but they realize his strength. "I was informed by the Chinese secret service you're a spy and we the people's republic of China gives me the authority to put you under arrest for trial." Over time, two armed policemen from the secretary's office came by and placed the two girls Patty and Jenny under arrest, taken into custody. "I want to go home" said Jenny, but Patty insisted not to give up: "Don't feel you lost the fight, sis. The chinese are supplying Russia and the UIR. I bet Rosie and Mira will stop them." Meanwhile in moscow, Paul and Mira are under watchful eyes of the Filitov regime, ready to extract information and perform horrendous acts of mental torture. Paul and Mira looked at each other...and admittedly spoke about their feelings for each other. "Our love won't end." said Mira, but for Paul "Yes, but we will not die!" And Rosie is held in a holding pin at the terror training camp...has able to untie herself, just when she gets to meet the head of the UIR himself: The ayatollah Nasseri: "Rosie, you're such an infidel. I'm the president of the UIR...and don't trample on my authority." He gives a warning to what they plan to do against the world: "Iraq is on fire, then Japan, soon Finland...and your 'satan' land is next!" * Chapter 14 follows* |
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| Spie Dude 106 | Sep 7 2007, 09:56 AM Post #20 |
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chapter 14. "This isn't happening!", Clover screamed. She was with Sam and Ryan in the main WOOHP office. "Relax. Besides, I think we've got some who can help us out of this mess." Ryan told them. He introduced them to the Russian Defence Minister himself, and a Marshal at that. Grigori Zhukovich Romanov. "Can we really trust him?", Alex asked. "He only wants piece with us. Afterall, he is one of the last of the Romanov family.", Sam reasured after looking at his file. "Well, a coup that's actually gonna help us. Never saw that coming." This came from Mandy. *chapter 15 follows* |
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