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| Agent Oddball | Dec 14 2007, 11:26 PM Post #1 |
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I entered this fanfic for this contest on TSUG: http://tsug.net/index.php?showtopic=939 Best viewed here: http://www.freewebs.com/fashion-spies/tslibrary.htm No More Xmas Shopping Chapter One The spies are sitting in Sam’s room watching the news “All stores have now open Christmas toys, Christmas trees, clothes and much more so get in early to by your Christmas presents,” said the TV reporter. “You bet I will get in early,” said Clover. “Calm down Clover, Christmas is in 1 and a half weeks,” said Alex in a relaxed voice. “I know but all the good Christmas supplies will be gone soon,” said Clover. “Clover has got a point, lets go now,” said Sam hoping there’ll be good Christmas presents left for her to buy for family and friends. “I’m driving!” yelled Clover. Chapter Two All the three of the spies ran outside to the car. Clover started the car and sped down the roads to get to the mall. “Slow down Clover!” screamed Alex. “Your going to crash the car!” screamed Sam at the top of her voice. Once they reached the mall Clover threw her foot on the brakes. “Gee I’m happy they invented seat belts,” said Alex wishing Clover wouldn’t drive so fast. Clover then started driving around the mall car park but after ten minutes of searching for a park they couldn’t find one. “Lets just park on the road,” said Clover. When Alex and Sam opened there doors a car sped past and broke the door “Oh my god!” screamed Alex. Sam fainted by fright. After 20 minutes of trying to wake up Sam she woke “What happened?” asked Sam in a soft voice. “I’ll put it short,” said Clover “A car broke the door when you opened and then you fainted by fright,” said Clover fast. “And it all happened in twenty minutes,” said Alex. “Ok, I’ve never fainted before,” said Sam. “Doesn’t matter, your better now Sam,” said Alex happy Sam is ok. “Lets go in now!” said Clover ready to speed into the mall. Chapter Three Clover ran into the mall with Sam and Alex tagging behind “YAY! Were here!” screamed Clover and everyone stared at her. “Opps I didn’t mean to shout,” said Clover. Then everyone went back to what they were doing. Then Alex and Sam finally got to the mall “What happened?” asked Alex. “Nothing,” said Clover blushes. “Ok,” said Sam thinking she is so not telling the truth. “Lets split up and meet at the sushi bar at 2:00,” said Alex. “Ok!” said Clover. They all ran off to different stores Chapter 4 At 2:00 they were all at the sushi bar with dozens of bags “I brought way more then I thought I would,” said Sam. “Me too,” said Alex. Suddenly there was this big crash “What was that?” said Clover. They looked around and all the doors and windows were locked shut and covered with steel “WHERE TRAPPED!!!” screamed a custmer. Sam, Clover & Alex stood on the table “Calm down everyone, its all under control,” said Alex. “I’m gonna try and ring Jerry on the X-Powder,” Sam turned on her X-Powder “I’ve got a message from a guy called Zack Williams,” said Sam wondering who in the world is Zack Williams. “Read it! It may be from guy who has a crush on you,” said Clover. Sam opened the message, her mouth dropped open “It says..... Ho, ho, ho, Have an Unmerry Christmas, and yes it was me who locked the mall, see ya loser,” read Sam with a shocked face. “That geek,” said Alex angry. “Now that you’ve read message try to contact Jerry,” said Clover. “No need to because i’m here,” said Jerry standing behind them. The spies turned around “Perfect, Jerry is here too, now who do we call,” said Alex. “I’ll go ring some WOOHP Agents,” said Jerry. “Sorry no reception,” said Jerry. Chapter 5 Clover was just about to talke when a voice said “Silence.” “I am the one responsible for this crime, me, Zack Williams,” said Zack in a microphone. “Its you!” yelled Sam. “Whats your plot?” asked alex in a very loud voice. “My plot you ask to hear,” “My plot is to put an end to Christmas, because if people can’t buy Christmas gifts then people can’t be given Christmas gifts and that means sad people and that shall put an end to Christmas spirit which will put an end to Christmas,” said Zack. Everyone in the shopping centre started going “BOO!!!”. “Silence you dorks,” screamed Zack. While Zack was screaming at everyone the spies and Jerry made a plan. “Ok so we sneak on some of his hench men beat’em up take their clothes put them on and fake were his hench men and then get’em,” whispered Clover. “Yup that the plan,” whispered Sam. “Ok lets split up,” whispered Jerry. They all snuck off in different and knocked out some hench men. They then all took their suits and put them on. They then went and stood behind Zack pretending to be henchman. “Sir we’ve got our meeting remember,” said Clover trying to sound all tuff. “When I come back I want total silence,” screamed out Zack to everybody. Zack walked off with Sam, Clover, Alex & Jerry behind him thinking their his henchman. Chapter 6 They all walked down to a limo and Jerry drove them down to some weird building where the navagator said to go. When they arrived they got out of the car and walked in. They all followed Zack into a room. When Zack wasn’t looking Clover tapped on his shoulder, then he turned around and Alex punched him in the face and he feel on the ground. “You guys run along, I’ll take care of him,” said Jerry. Sam, Clover and Alex took of there henchman suits and then ran back to the mall. When they reached the mall people were banging on the walls screaming “Let us out!!!” screamed lots of voices. “Looks like this is a job for the lipstick laser,” said Clover. Clover pulled out her lipstick laser and started cutting down the wall. When she finished with the laser the wall fell down and thousands of people ran out thanks Sam, Clover & Alex. Then Jerry arrived. “Great work girls, your deserve a rest,” said Jerry. He drove them home in a really flashy looking car. Chapter 7 When the spies got home they went to bed. When they woke up they got changed and opened up there windows and there was a nice red Ferrai with a bow on top. The spies ran outside. And there was a giant card on top. Clover read the car “Happy Early Christmas Spies, Enjoy the car, Best Wishes Jerry.” “That is so sweet of him,” said Sam & Alex at the same time. “So should we take it for a spin to the mall to do our Christmas shopping?” asked Clover. “Sure thing,” said Alex. “I’m driving!” yelled Sam. They jumped in the car and drove off to the mall. Chapter 8 1 and half weeks later on Christmas day Alex woke up really early. “Its Christmas!” she screamed waking up Clover & Sam. They ran into the lounge room. “Ok time for giving gifts,” said Alex. “This is yours Alex, and this is yours Sam,” said Clover giving them out. “Here are my presents for both of you,” said Alex. “And here are my presents for each of you,” said Sam. “Just before we open our presents lets remind Beverly Hills its Christmas by screaming out Merry Christmas,” said Clover. “Ok,” said Alex. They ran into their yard and screamed out “Merry Christmas!!!”. Then they started to giggle and walked inside. THE END |
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| Emma | Dec 23 2007, 02:32 AM Post #2 |
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its cool cant get y eyes off it!!! |
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| Agent Oddball | Dec 23 2007, 02:50 AM Post #3 |
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It's Cruella!!!
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Thanks. |
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| Mike D 27 | Dec 23 2007, 03:06 AM Post #4 |
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AO, Thanks for your holiday fan fic, as we find the spies rush into action to save holiday shopping for all. I read how the mall was closed in chapter 5 and those spies can't stand it..."oh no I must shop 'til I drop." Mall Rat, you ever had nightmares about your fave mall (MetroNorth in beautiful K.C.) closed its doors on you? J/k...but who in the right mind won't sell its goods in the height of the holiday shopping season? |
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| Agent Oddball | Dec 23 2007, 04:26 AM Post #5 |
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It's Cruella!!!
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Thanks to you Mike too. |
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| Agent Oddball | Dec 23 2007, 04:26 AM Post #6 |
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It's Cruella!!!
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Thanks to you Mike too. |
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